3 Comments

  1. Editor April 10, 2007 @ 2:12 pm

    flippant. last stanza could be wittier or something. seems to give up somehow.

  2. fogman April 11, 2007 @ 4:11 pm

    so maybe the last line is a lot like the lips in the title?

  3. Editor April 11, 2007 @ 7:01 pm

    yeah fogman… i think you may be right.

because foxes live under the rainbow

Guest Writers Comments (3)


Your lips aren’t as moist as the little card says
By JD Nelson

Runaway ghouls
& pine cones.

Who has
the flashlight?

I need to go
behind that tree –

Maybe I’ll lose
the clown makeup
& start some nice
spaghetti.

Editor @ April 9, 2007

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