Comments on: The First Love Poem I’ve Ever Actually Meant http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry Publishing Creative and Contemporary Writing Wed, 08 Feb 2012 03:07:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: WindWitch http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-202 WindWitch Sun, 24 Jun 2007 05:22:34 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/#comment-202 your stunned realization that you were actually inside another person, how you begged her to open her eyes, I’m looking for a little relief. this is a powerful idea and a mighty fine poem all around. your stunned realization
that you were actually inside another person,
how you begged her to open her eyes,
I’m looking for a little relief.

this is a powerful idea and a mighty fine poem all around.

]]> By: fogman http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-193 fogman Thu, 21 Jun 2007 19:27:56 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/#comment-193 no shit, this is a terrific poem. I like the long build-up of sleepless nights (and a racing mind) as it leads me down to the final line, which is loaded with impact. Especially after reading all this and wondering where the love poem is. Nice job. no shit, this is a terrific poem. I like the long build-up of sleepless nights (and a racing mind) as it leads me down to the final line, which is loaded with impact. Especially after reading all this and wondering where the love poem is. Nice job.

]]> By: misener http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-192 misener Thu, 21 Jun 2007 04:09:00 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/06/20/and-the-crepe-myrtles-cry/#comment-192 Make my funk the Pete Funk, I wants to gets funked up! I think this is wonderful. I'm feelin' it, Doctor Funkenstein. I think the last stanza is a little off in terms of quality (as compared to the rest of this beauty), but overall this is the best thing I've read on H & H in a while. Bravo! Make my funk the Pete Funk, I wants to gets funked up!

I think this is wonderful. I’m feelin’ it, Doctor Funkenstein. I think the last stanza is a little off in terms of quality (as compared to the rest of this beauty), but overall this is the best thing I’ve read on H & H in a while. Bravo!

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