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  1. misener July 9, 2007 @ 6:17 am

    I really like this. The only thing, to me, is that it could’ve flowed better. Maybe as a prose poem? The revelries here about God are interesting and I love the idea of blending suburbanization with religious sentiment. My opinion: God looks down at the roofs, nudges Jesus (seated to the right), and asks “What the hell is this all about?”

and the sun finally rises

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Poem Written On a Sunday
By Gavin Lambert

At church

They all pray but

I’ve got no one

To pray to

So I stay home

On Sundays and

Write poems instead

Or play guitar

Yesterday it occurred

To me that if you were

To look at our house

From above

It would look like

A cross and it occurred

To me that if there

Was a God, a Christian

God, that that might

Please Him,

To look down at my

Neighborhood

And see a nice neat

Grid of empty crosses

Like bull’s eyes

Piously staring up at Him

Or

It could just as easily be

A bit disconcerting

For Him to see them all

All the subdivisions

Of the world

Bearing up at Him

Their empty crucifixes

A constant beckoning

To Him for

More blood

I guess it’s just a matter

Of perspective

Editor @ July 8, 2007

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