http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/07/08/and-the-sun-finally-rises/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=and-the-sun-finally-rises Publishing Creative and Contemporary Writing Wed, 08 Feb 2012 03:07:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/07/08/and-the-sun-finally-rises/comment-page-1/#comment-242 misener Mon, 09 Jul 2007 13:17:04 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2007/07/08/and-the-sun-finally-rises/#comment-242 I really like this. The only thing, to me, is that it could've flowed better. Maybe as a prose poem? The revelries here about God are interesting and I love the idea of blending suburbanization with religious sentiment. My opinion: God looks down at the roofs, nudges Jesus (seated to the right), and asks "What the hell is this all about?" I really like this. The only thing, to me, is that it could’ve flowed better. Maybe as a prose poem? The revelries here about God are interesting and I love the idea of blending suburbanization with religious sentiment. My opinion: God looks down at the roofs, nudges Jesus (seated to the right), and asks “What the hell is this all about?”

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