the only thng that would have made it better for me would have been some breaks. stanza, line, whatever. maybe three stanzas? just personal opinion, though.

gooooooood shit

my favorite piece:

“We started in the bathroom,
braided rug under our knees,
hands full of fleshy curiosity,
everything wet,
each part the echo
of another.
The possibility of pattern.
The mutability of limbs.
A dissection of lines and angles.
Questions about how
we could fit together.”

gooooooooooooooooood sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.

to quote parliament. . . I want the bomb, I want the P Funk”