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  1. fogman October 20, 2007 @ 10:34 am

    I think the narrator of this poem needs to get out more often.

  2. misener October 20, 2007 @ 10:46 am

    Ha. I couldn’t agree more.

  3. Quasimofo October 20, 2007 @ 6:43 pm

    Fantasy can be a powerful force! …therapeutic to an extent, but fatal if you become addicted to it. My laptop sally is Petra Verkaik..mmmm, her hair reminds me of a warm safe place where as a child I’d hide, and wait for the thunder and the rain, but why did it pass me by?

    ..”maybe I’ll step out and catch a parliament [funkadelic (the band?) or perhaps cigarette?] on the ghetto porch..”—that grabbed me, maybe because i’ve done that before and it’s just one of those necessary ’stop time’ moments where you reflect and take a breather from life..Cool poem

  4. Halifax October 21, 2007 @ 6:50 am

    The “thumb drive” (in my mind) leads to a feeling not tied to an individual “laptop” but to the experience. In a pot laced haze of laissez-faire intimate encounters, the recipient of the thumb drive is unspecific and unimportant (so long as that USB is available).

    Mis dos centavos.

Laptop Sally

Shawn Misener


Laptop Sally
by shawn misener

it’s with fuzzy fingers
that I finger you
my love

I wait for you to come
and I twitch away
with fingers fuzzy
and brain looped on pot

maybe I’ll step out
and catch a parliament
on the ghetto porch

I guess I can wait
out there
in the cold
with the comfort of smoke

but when I return
I expect you to yield a good one
my love

show me the letters
once again

I’ll take your guts away
in a thumb drive
wherever I go

but I’ll always return to you
and your glowing screen

misener @ October 18, 2007

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