Comments on: bob munchkin had a rifle in his silver pants http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2008/08/21/bob-munchkin-had-a-rifle-in-his-silver-pants/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=bob-munchkin-had-a-rifle-in-his-silver-pants Publishing Creative and Contemporary Writing Wed, 08 Feb 2012 03:07:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Quasimofo http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2008/08/21/bob-munchkin-had-a-rifle-in-his-silver-pants/comment-page-1/#comment-834 Quasimofo Sat, 23 Aug 2008 12:51:13 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2008/08/21/bob-munchkin-had-a-rifle-in-his-silver-pants/#comment-834 Ahh shit! Yep, i didn't even notice the no-punctuation...good call. Which is not to say that a poem sans-commas et.al. will sucessfully 'flow' better and even then i suppose it's every reader for themself. But hey, if i was homosexual (and there's nothing wrong with that), I'd whisk this guy to San Francisco and get married by an Elvis preacher, oh wait, that's Las Vegas,...we'd tie the knot on the Golden Gate, eat Rice-a-Roni, and bed-n-breakfast at Alcatraz! The material jostles my 'everything might be ok with the universe even if it's not at least i'm not alone in this blessfull struggle' P H E R O M E S... alright, i'm gonna go get my medication now... Ahh shit! Yep, i didn’t even notice the no-punctuation…good call. Which is not to say that a poem sans-commas et.al. will sucessfully ‘flow’ better and even then i suppose it’s every reader for themself. But hey, if i was homosexual (and there’s nothing wrong with that), I’d whisk this guy to San Francisco and get married by an Elvis preacher, oh wait, that’s Las Vegas,…we’d tie the knot on the Golden Gate, eat Rice-a-Roni, and bed-n-breakfast at Alcatraz! The material jostles my ‘everything might be ok with the universe even if it’s not at least i’m not alone in this blessfull struggle’ P H E R O M E S… alright, i’m gonna go get my medication now…

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]]> By: Quasimofo http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2008/08/21/bob-munchkin-had-a-rifle-in-his-silver-pants/comment-page-1/#comment-831 Quasimofo Fri, 22 Aug 2008 10:04:58 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2008/08/21/bob-munchkin-had-a-rifle-in-his-silver-pants/#comment-831 You must be blessed with a working class saint's idiomatic finesse'. Reading this poem in my mind's eye is like watching my favorite supermodel ski flawlessly naked down Mt. Fuji in-between flags like knockout coconut beauty weaving art rutting its mark ejaculating sweet soft snowcone essence into the timid winter air... ahh, you get my point. Word selection/ideas is so difficult to really do 'uniquely' with balance and poise...not too much poetics stuffed thru the creative funnel cake if you know what I mean...a true poet's expression with divine flow. Dammit! Now i feel this urge to go out and buy silver pants! I already got the rifle, hehehe. Kick ass poem, dude! You must be blessed with a working class saint’s idiomatic finesse’. Reading this poem in my mind’s eye is like watching my favorite supermodel ski flawlessly naked down Mt. Fuji in-between flags like knockout coconut beauty weaving art rutting its mark ejaculating sweet soft snowcone essence into the timid winter air… ahh, you get my point.

Word selection/ideas is so difficult to really do ‘uniquely’ with balance and poise…not too much poetics stuffed thru the creative funnel cake if you know what I mean…a true poet’s expression with divine flow.

Dammit! Now i feel this urge to go out and buy silver pants! I already got the rifle, hehehe. Kick ass poem, dude!

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