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Beast Brutality

Submitted by on October 18, 2008 – 7:28 amOne Comment


Beast Brutality
by Mary Jo Bang

The caption read,

“He and she standing quietly next to a dog.”

The prompt queen sat with her crown on,

The insets between each Gothic arch providing a measure

Of what can be

Done with architecture.

She said, “We built it long ago.

And then we knocked it down.”

And then she looked away.

“And then we looked away.”

September 8, 2008

One Comment »

  • savagewave says:

    I really love this. The commentary echoes, pre-echoes, reiteration. And how “We built it long ago.

    And then we knocked it down.” can mean so many things, from the institution of marriage to an institution of insanity. Same, same.

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