3 Comments

  1. savagewave June 25, 2009 @ 7:31 am

    Oh yes. I hope this really happened because I love conversations and moments like this. And truth.

  2. savagewave June 25, 2009 @ 10:54 pm

    K, so I really like this. I hope this happened because moments in time, and communication, like this is so freaking real and important.

    And truth rocks.

  3. joecloyd July 7, 2009 @ 5:31 pm

    That is the stupidest simile I’ve ever come across. Given the choice of having my poem edited or getting raped, I think I’d go with the editing.

A Little Like Rape

Guest Writers Comments (3)

student_alcohol_girl_08
A Little Like Rape
by donal mahoney

This sylph came forward
from the second row
the second day of class
and asked if
I would edit her poem
so it would read
the way it should.

I told her straightaway
that even though
this was writing class
and I was the instructor,
I couldn’t edit her poem
and still have the poem be hers.

Editing her poem, I said,
would be a little like rape,
just painful in a different way
whether she understood that
yet or not.

Editor @ June 24, 2009

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