Comments on: whiskey sours http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2010/02/08/whiskey-sours/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=whiskey-sours Publishing Creative and Contemporary Writing Fri, 10 Sep 2010 20:03:03 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: savagewave http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2010/02/08/whiskey-sours/comment-page-1/#comment-2177 savagewave Fri, 19 Feb 2010 00:17:59 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/?p=5971#comment-2177 Just learned a little secret about this poem...there are white letters here. cool. Just learned a little secret about this poem…there are white letters here.

cool.

]]> By: Quasimofo http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2010/02/08/whiskey-sours/comment-page-1/#comment-2154 Quasimofo Fri, 12 Feb 2010 15:09:13 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/?p=5971#comment-2154 Matthew 5:13 (21st Century King James Version) 13"Ye are the salt of the earth, but if the salt has lost his savor, wherewith shall it be salted? It is thenceforth good for nothing, but to be cast out and to be trodden under foot of men...poem brought to wonderful conclusion incorporating this: "tart regret thrown back like shots chased by lime and salt". Artful construction. '...casually cow tipping twenties at the strip club, calls it “child support”...lots of humor mixed in with real life degradation here. We laugh and cry at the same time. Matthew 5:13 (21st Century King James Version)

13″Ye are the salt of the earth, but if the salt has lost his savor, wherewith shall it be salted? It is thenceforth good for nothing, but to be cast out and to be trodden under foot of men…poem brought to wonderful conclusion incorporating this: “tart regret thrown back like shots chased by lime and salt”.

Artful construction. ‘…casually cow tipping
twenties at the strip club, calls it “child support”…lots of humor mixed in with real life degradation here. We laugh and cry at the same time.

]]> By: Garland Middleton http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/2010/02/08/whiskey-sours/comment-page-1/#comment-2138 Garland Middleton Mon, 08 Feb 2010 16:19:52 +0000 http://www.haggardandhalloo.com/?p=5971#comment-2138 'clean shirt ranch hand saint' sweet! great poem. i love every line. ‘clean shirt ranch hand saint’ sweet!

great poem. i love every line.

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