Daily Commute

Daily Commute
by jessica goodheart
We ride out of downtown on a river of exhaust,
past a woman, drunk with the fumes,
who clutches a sign in dirty hands:
Very hungry. Please help.
Once I stopped to explain why we dress in steel,
point our chins East.
She shook her head, unwilling
to know a world outside her sorrow,
and I don’t stop any more. She doesn’t understand
the flow of traffic, the agreement we’ve made to move in sync.
Sometimes she holds out a bouquet of roses
as if she wanted to jam the freeways with her troubled flowers,
but we keep going, drifting on rafts of glass
toward the freedom of our separate houses,
windows that flicker television blue
along the quieted streets.

0 thoughts on “Daily Commute

  1. in line 2, maybe “on” instead of “with the.” i’m a little confused by the third couplet.
    i think “the freedome of our separate houses” says it all right there. the last couplet reminds me of a part in the book Dharma Bums. enjoyed your poem.

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