looking up
LOOKING UP
by ryan ritchie
Wrote a shitty poem
and tried to write another
but that once sucked more than the first one
So I flipped on the internet
and jacked off to some porn
Finally,
something’s going my way
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okay…so this could be a further comment on crappy poetry…
this made me laugh.
You should have gone swimming- it’s summer!
I liked this one. It made me laugh as well.
I have nothing against the grotesque. In fact, masturbation is one of my favorite past times… but I don’t understand why you guys think this is so funny. The best thing about this piece is the title (nice pun by the way). It wasn’t laughs but groans that emanated from this writer. As in, “Aw man, not another masturbation/poetry-as-porn motif.”