poetry
poetry
by t. coates
peregrine falcon
only an observer
exudes its finite flying skill
til wind, man or mind
render it groundward
yearning to ascend again
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acrostic as metaphor, and a reasonably interesting one too. I’d like it better with caps at the start of each line to emphasize the acrostic, rather than the bold font. That would also emphasize each phrase, creating a bit of a disjuncture to what reads as a single, fill-in-the-punctuation sentence.