Origami
Origami
by Kimberly Ruth
Fake trees bleeding water
like ticking clocks
and folded napkins.
She said seas sin
or something like it.
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Origami
by Kimberly Ruth
Fake trees bleeding water
like ticking clocks
and folded napkins.
She said seas sin
or something like it.
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Beautiful imagery!
As you’re probably well aware, I usually don’t go for stuff like this, but this one isn’t bad; in fact, it’s your best… the strong opening line really ties the similes and the rest of it together very nicely.