Life
Life
by Ivan Offski
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The last stanza is the best.
almost effortless.
Indeed. You don’t see many of these poems anymore. It’s a late 60’s throw back that mostly doesn’t work very well unless, like this “poem”, is kept very simple.
Simple but very effective!